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Teen Poetry #8

Clearly

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2008-07-04 10:37 PM

Clearly

I could see it all clearly,
The little white house
My very own chair
And my hair in my mouth

Your hand, gently rested
On shoulders and knee
The children that played
Our own family

Their golden brown hair
And summer attire
The woods that they played in
The smell of fresh fire

A kiss that you gathered
From my lips to yours
The silent cool breeze
That blew through the doors

I can see it all clearly
One day it will be
Just as I see it
Our life- you and me

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2008-07-05 11:01 AM

u blow my socks of everytime.... amazing write.. i love it..

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-07-05 11:14 AM

Awe....

Well done..

(Library)

"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb....,"he murmured. "What a stupid lamb," I sighed. "What a sick, masochistic lion."

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

3 posted 2008-07-05 01:02 PM

Red!! Yay, something new

And i like! Nicely done

If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

4 posted 2008-07-05 05:29 PM

Thank you thank you. Nice to know I was missed, had schooling to finish and then some of those lovely vacations and then no inspiration I'm working on something new today too. Thanks again guys.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

5 posted 2008-07-07 01:52 PM

AWWW

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