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Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-07-03 07:26 PM

They are obvious signs to see what I do.
You think you know me.. well the thing is..im not like you.

I'm different more then you think.
But your insults make me lower and I sink.

Depression has its hold.. Leaving no gaps.
You still can't see what lies on under.. I keep it undercaps.

I want to tell you, but you can't see what I see.
I try to talk to you.. but you finally left me be.

Feeling all alone in this world full of hate.
Weither that im good or not.. that's for you to debate.

I'm not your peacemaker, no matter how hard I try.
You think I am who I pretend to be. But im not your type of guy.

I'm all so different even if its hard for you to see.
I want you to like me, but you just can accept you I be...
~Zach~

"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb....,"he murmured. "What a stupid lamb," I sighed. "What a sick, masochistic lion."

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2008-07-03 07:40 PM

"Feeling all alone in this world full of hate.
Weither that im good or not.. that's for you to debate."

Wow, i really liked this. It had a lot of passion

Nice write

If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

Tripp'ncutie
Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 73
minnasota

2 posted 2008-07-04 02:29 AM

zach great write, i really felt the emotion in there. that was amazing.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

3 posted 2008-07-04 02:59 AM

2 words, Amazing + Library.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

4 posted 2008-07-07 06:42 PM

No need to say more than emily. So...what she said.

~*Julianna*~

"This lullaby is only a few words
A simple run of chords
Quiet here in this spare room
But you can hear it, hear it
Wherever you m

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

5 posted 2008-07-07 07:28 PM

i loved this part- so much

I'm not your peacemaker, no matter how hard I try.
You think I am who I pretend to be. But im not your type of guy.

awesome man, i love it, library, i really like it zach.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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