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0 posted 2008-07-02 12:45 PM



Clock clicking by.
And you still haven't called.
I stay up late only to hear your voice.
But Fate had his own plans..

You were driving home.
From that party last night.
You didn't have a drop to drink.
But Fate had his own plans..

There was another driver.
Driving on the wrong side of his lane.
He, of course, had only one drink.
But Fate had his own plans for you...

Now I'm waiting for the hospital to call.
I waited for you to wake from your sleep.
I would wake you but I'm no Prince Charming.
Please Fate take me instead..

The world would be better off without me anyway..
She has people caring for her..
Where I don't.. I care too much for her..
To be stuck in this eternal sleep.

Dear God, I know you being almighty.
You make all the plans.
But can't you spare her? For me?
I can't fathem living with out my love.

But I know she needs to be with you.
Go to the light my love.
I know you need to be there.
But here's a little messege, from me to you.

I love you darling,
way too much to understand.
I know you must leave..
and I don't want you to be held-back because of me.

You left me with my broken heart.
while They burry you in the dirt.
Left me to cry out my whole soul
And then some...

I'll just be here left to pick up the shards
I'll visit your grave, once everyday.
Because I know if I visit you too much.
My heart will shatter, even more then it allready is...

"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb....,"he murmured. "What a stupid lamb," I sighed. "What a sick, masochistic lion."

© Copyright 2008 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
prettypinkrebel
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1 posted 2008-07-02 01:00 PM


Omg i love this. Its amazing and exactly how i feel about my best friend who htis happened to. Im sorry i wish i could say that it will get better but thats not always true,library
rockangel_gv
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since 2008-03-29
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2 posted 2008-07-02 03:30 PM


I am so sorry,I understand you, but how bad it seams....never give up!
Tripp'ncutie
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minnasota
3 posted 2008-07-02 05:42 PM


i am very sorry i had one of my best friends pass away in a car accident with a drunk'n diver when he had nothing.

so ya i feel the pain.

hugs

XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland
4 posted 2008-07-02 05:49 PM


Library.

  {~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

BrittanyJ
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5 posted 2008-07-03 06:30 PM


Wow, the same thing happened to my boyfriend about a year ago. I have a poem on here somewhere, i think it was called Too Late...but i know how you feel. It tough...moving on. Nice write, thanks for sharing

If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

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