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rockangel_gv Junior Member
since 2008-03-29
Posts 43 |
Once I loved you,, But now my love is gone, It`s fallig in the ocean, I am all alone… You were trying to change me… I wasn`t good enough? Don`t try to blame me, To be ok…I was trying hard. Because of you, my heart was broken, For the first time in my life, Because of you, it`s something unspoken It`s killing me inside, it blows my mind… Don`t make me stay, Don`t make me cry, Just turn around, go away, Without to say goodbye… I loved you, may it`s true, But I`ve cried a lot of tears because of you, need to go, need to move on, you miss one thing…. Oh, it doesn`t matter, I am gone… |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
"I loved you, may it`s true, But I`ve cried a lot of tears because of you, need to go, need to move on, you miss one thing…. Oh, it doesn`t matter, I am gone…" Such beauty in sorrows words.. I'm sorry.. Library.. "And so the lion fell in love with the lamb....,"he murmured. "What a stupid lamb," I sighed. "What a sick, masochistic lion." |
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Tripp'ncutie Member
since 2008-05-05
Posts 73minnasota |
what a poem, i loved it. seriously wasnt planning to feel sorrow today but eh its ok, great work always pulls at the emotional strings. nice work! |
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rockangel_gv Junior Member
since 2008-03-29
Posts 43 |
Thank you  , I am glad you like it anyway |
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