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HersheyKiss
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since 2008-06-02
Posts 137
New Jersey

0 posted 2008-07-02 10:52 AM


Wrote this yesterday when I came back from the doctor. It's not my best. I left this for my dad on the table for when he comes home.

Goodbye:

Hey dad
How do you do
I have some news
I need to tell you

I hate the things
That you do to me
I need you to stop
I beg you please

Dad just please stop
I can't live like this
I can't keep hiding the bruises
I get from your fits

If you hit me once more
You're not only hurting me
But the one growing inside
That in February is going to be free

If you end up
Killing me so
It's not just one person
But two you know

I can't keep doing this
I'm sorry but I'm out
This is getting out of hand
It's what you are all about

Don't come looking
For I am not coming back
You lost your only daughter
Until you change your act.

© Copyright 2008 Danielle - All Rights Reserved
RevengeIsMine
Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
1 posted 2008-07-02 11:12 AM


Its taken me a while to process this..

Hun are you okay??

Are you having a baby??

Please Email me.. i want to give you all the support you need..

I had a baby.. I was rapped and fell pregnant.. I gave birth to a little girl and i have an idea of whats going through your mind.. PLEASE EMAIL or let me know your okay..

feral_til_death@hotmail.com
or
little_miss_revenge@hotmail.com

rockangel_gv
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since 2008-03-29
Posts 43

2 posted 2008-07-02 11:20 AM


I understand you...and must to tell you, it`s realy good. if you need to talk, just write : rockangel_gv@hotmail.com


Falling rain
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since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois
3 posted 2008-07-02 11:56 AM


Whoa... Talk to Jess... She does know what she's talking about.. I'm here if you just need an ear to listen and for some advice... zach_booker@hotmail.com .. Hope you get better..

~Zach~

"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb....,"he murmured. "What a stupid lamb," I sighed. "What a sick, masochistic lion."

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
4 posted 2008-07-03 04:34 PM


Oh hun, I dont know what to say to you. Talk to Jess, she's really good at helping. And you have my e-mail...I think.

    {~~*~~}


"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

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