It's 2 AM Somewhere ( Sequal To Clockwork Orange's "It's Cold At 2 AM"

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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2008-07-02 02:30 AM

A broken tear and a faded light
A shallow heart is breaking tonight
It’s 2 AM somewhere andI’m shivering in the cold
Left with nothing but a shattered memory of you to hold

I’m standing on my front door
And those memories don’t count anymore
We justleft everything just threw it all away
Things would be different had I asked you to stay

Don’t say that you don’t matter because you know it isn’t true
Don’t say that I don’t miss you because every night I think of you
Don’t say that you’re not worth it when you are worth the fight
Don’t say that I don’t need you, because I need you every night

The night’s air is cold and I’m lost in regret
Every ounce of me misses the friend I can’t forget
But somewhere in the tempest hope will still remain
It’s 2am somewhere in the morning rain

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-07-02 02:44 AM

Jess!!! Wow haven't talk to you in a long time! This poem is amazingly good... I can connect to this poem oh so well... Library

~Zach~

"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb....,"he murmured. "What a stupid lamb," I sighed. "What a sick, masochistic lion."

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

2 posted 2008-07-02 12:43 PM

"The night’s air is cold and I’m lost in regret
Every ounce of me misses the friend I can’t forget"

Wow, this is so sad, and very touching. I can relate very well. Thank you for sharing

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

3 posted 2008-07-02 06:24 PM

I love this, but I fear that it will be something I will be able to relate to sooner of later. All the same, it's amazing.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

4 posted 2008-07-03 01:58 PM

you leave me in awe every time wordspinner.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

5 posted 2008-07-10 10:57 AM

This is a really amazing sequal. I love it just as much as the first "Its Cold At 2am". Love your work every time.

~*Julianna*~

"This lullaby is only a few words
A simple run of chords
Quiet here in this spare room
But only you can hear it, hear it..."
-Sara

eternally_singing
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since 2007-12-18

Posts 123
PA, United States

6 posted 2008-07-10 11:57 PM

Absolutly astounding. Sadly I am able to relate. Thought I must say is was very eloquently put. I especially loved the last stanza:
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The night’s air is cold and I’m lost in regret
Every ounce of me misses the friend I can’t forget
But somewhere in the tempest hope will still remain
It’s 2am somewhere in the morning rain
-----

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

7 posted 2008-07-12 10:51 AM

wow, i missed you, i can't believe how good you are, i'm so jealous lol. Hope all is good with you. thanks for the welcome back and reading mine, i always appreciate your commentary.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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