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Teen Poetry #8

Big Grils Sure Do Cry

HersheyKiss
Member

since 2008-06-02

Posts 137
New Jersey

0 posted 2008-07-01 11:12 AM

Big Girls Sure Do Cry:

The tears fall silently,
So quiet that no-one hears,
They leave wetness on my cheeks,
But do not calm my fears.

My body shakes with silent sobs,
But I dare not make a sound,
I may have the strength to lie,
If ever I were found.

This secret is destroying me,
But I don't let it show,
I wear a mask and force a smile,
That way they'll never know.

I must be stronger than I realize,
Because somehow I get by,
I may not let them see it,
But big girls sure do cry.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-07-01 01:19 PM

Awwe.. im like tearing up here.. great work.

"I must be stronger than I realize,
Because somehow I get by,
I may not let them see it,
But big girls sure do cry."

My favorite line. Keep up the writing and i hope you get better.

~Zach~

But of the tree of knowledge of good and evil,
thou shalt not eat of it;
for in the day that thou eatest thereof
thou shalt surely die.

Genesis

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2008-07-01 01:21 PM

LOVE IT.. I have ONE favourite poet of all time.. Ur now my number two... AMAZING WORK!!

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

3 posted 2008-07-01 08:39 PM

"This secret is destroying me,
But I don't let it show,
I wear a mask and force a smile,
That way they'll never know."

Wow this is amazing

But sad as well. A very nice write.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

4 posted 2008-07-02 12:12 PM

I've said it before and I am going to say it again! You are the next RevengeIsMine.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

rockangel_gv
Junior Member

since 2008-03-29

Posts 43

5 posted 2008-07-02 03:35 PM

This is great, I love it

p.s. And I am sure that and the big girls do cry

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