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Teen Poetry #8

WHY?

HersheyKiss
Member

since 2008-06-02

Posts 137
New Jersey

0 posted 2008-06-30 10:36 AM

Hey, wrote this last night... I think I'm going to give it to him I'm not sure yet.

WHY?:

Every time I look at my arms,
I remember what you have done,
The scratches run up and down,
And you caused every one.

Why in the world would you touch me?
I'm your daughter for gods sake,
But I guess you do not realize,
The extent of your mistake.

I trusted you Simon,
you are my father,
And then you just abused me,
I even tried to tell my mother.

Your ex-wife,
Did she have a daughter too?
Is there a more sinister reason,
As to why your wife left you?

You're a school teacher,
And you do stuff like this,
I really hate you,
You don't deserve to live.

WHY DID YOU DO IT?
LET'S HEAR YOUR EXCUSE,
GIVE ME ONE GOOD REASON,
WHY I DESERVE ABUSE.

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2008-06-30 11:35 AM

OMG.. i love this.. ur an amazing writer..

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-06-30 12:36 PM

Amazing... simply amazing... just being the worry-whort as i am, be careful giving him this.. he might relize or get mad.. im just being a little worry but great write!!

But of the tree of knowledge of good and evil,
thou shalt not eat of it;
for in the day that thou eatest thereof
thou shalt surely die.

Genesis

HersheyKiss
Member

since 2008-06-02

Posts 137
New Jersey

3 posted 2008-06-30 02:45 PM

thanks guys. I'm still unsure on whether to give it to him or not cuz I think he needs to realize what he's doing

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

4 posted 2008-06-30 05:23 PM

This is amazing. But like Zach said, jsut be careful...

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

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