Thats what you get when you hurt a friend.. (Sorry guys)

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Teen Poetry #8

Thats what you get when you hurt a friend.. (Sorry guys)

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-06-30 10:26 AM

Once upon a time I had friends
But all of that went to an utter end.
Somehow life does like me.
Neither do my friends.. i'm just to blind to see.

Somehow my words are twisted to lies.
For now im giving up. I'll just hide
You think you have friends when you really don't.
Even if you try to talk.. way down inside, you just won't.

I don't know what's going on. Everything is going too fast.
I tried to help everyone.. well little to say.. that's all in the past.
Me meadling into your problums.. is not my place.
I don't want to hear you talk.. to disgusted by my own face...

How can you live withyourself.. you stupid fake.
You learn to take in sorrow.. how much can you intake?
So you lost your friends it wasn't that hard.
What's that on the gound, a broken heart shard?

So your heart is broken.. and no one to mend.
Serves you right for treating the way you did to your so called "friend"
So I guess I'll be leaving, no words spoken or say goodbyes
I don't want to talk to you anymore in fear I'll be spreading more lies.

~Zach~

But of the tree of knowledge of good and evil,
thou shalt not eat of it;
for in the day that thou eatest thereof
thou shalt surely die.

Genesis

WaterFairy103
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since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

1 posted 2008-06-30 11:45 AM

Wow... Just... Wow. There's so much emotion in this poem!! I love it! I've gone through almost the same thing, so maybe it speaks to me a little more than it will to others, but it's still incredible!! AWESOME write!

Do the day, and let the day do you. - S. King

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

2 posted 2008-06-30 02:37 PM

"So I guess I'll be leaving, no words spoken or say goodbyes
I don't want to talk to you anymore in fear I'll be spreading more lies."

I liked the whole thing but this is my favorite verse. Nice job

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

3 posted 2008-07-01 10:16 AM

wow omg that's about all i can say right now you have me speechless just wow!!!!

i'm lost and going nowhere

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