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Love that won't disappear
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Love that won't disappear |
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broken_imperfection Junior Member
since 2008-06-27
Posts 15WV, USA |
"How can you love me when I don't love myself?" Always there to shade me always there to help.. You hate my habits the habits I can't erase.. Still the tears in your eyes I still can't trace... I'm hurting you but you don't see.. Your greatest mistake was ever loving me.. You do bring that smile the one upon my face.. But in that same minute the smile always gets replaced.. I feel like a failure because I always do wrong.. Still there you stand remaining strong.... I hate the fact that you keep me away.. Away from the plan that I planned everyday... This love is something in which I didn't need... My scars open the cuts they continue to bleed... My tears continue to fall consuming your head with lies... I'm going to break this cycle of the tears returning to your eyes.. I wish you would leave me behind and walk out that door... I wish you never came in my life because I can't take no more... I hate you for loving me I hate myself for loving you... But I can't do anything no matter what I try and do... Most of All... I Hate This Love That Wont Disappear.. "Don't hit your kids. No, seriously, they have guns now." |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
This had a wonderful plot, but it seemed like you were forcing the ryhme...just try 2 let it flow. So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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