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RedNail
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 65
Stockholm, Sweden

0 posted 2008-06-29 08:58 PM

Clouds are gathering above
I walk alone while my inside scream

Since you keep looking right through me

It's cold outside and I should be asleep
But I can't since I've forgot who I used to be

I keep walking on, now it's a storm
and I'm scared I'll forget to hold on

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-06-29 09:33 PM

This is really good, I love it. Library.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-06-30 03:54 PM

Sandra.. I havent read a poem from you for a long time

great poem i love this
Krysti

RedNail
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 65
Stockholm, Sweden

3 posted 2008-06-30 04:10 PM

Thank you guys, yea I've been busy getting to know my new camera and new version of photoshop.

Hopefully, I'll be able to put these two hobbies togather more often now.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2008-06-30 04:56 PM

Wow this is really good. I like it!! two thumbs up!

But of the tree of knowledge of good and evil,
thou shalt not eat of it;
for in the day that thou eatest thereof
thou shalt surely die.

Genesis

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

5 posted 2008-06-30 05:11 PM

wow i really enjoyed this. it may of been short but very very powerful.

i'm lost and going nowhere

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

6 posted 2008-07-01 12:07 PM

"It's cold outside and I should be asleep
But I can't since I've forgot who I used to be"

I loved this line. It just kind of jumped out at me.
Great write

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

Tripp'ncutie
Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 73
minnasota

7 posted 2008-07-01 11:08 AM

deep i enjoyed it great read and great write. keep up the work total library for sure.

RedNail
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 65
Stockholm, Sweden

8 posted 2008-07-01 08:22 PM

Wow, thank you for all of your responses.
I'm glad that you liked it and I never thought that someone actually would put one of my poems in their library. <3

Life is a rollercoster, live for the ride.

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