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CompSpud
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0 posted 2008-06-29 07:37 PM



My mother asked me to come inside.
As i sat waiting for my mother to say
She starts speaking im sure she is about to cry
But as she started to explain im sure i felt Something had died inside
Something i feared the most something wasnt right inside

When it all came out the peaces started to fit
All the time it was going though my head
The only thing i could do is mumable a little bit
When i found out i was on my last thread

The tears rushed down my face
I WiSH, i could of offerd support there and then
I WiSH, i could of sort my self and get straight to the case
I WiSH, i wasnt going around in cercles again and again
But then my senses kicked in, its not about me
Its about the person who needs a friend

As the kemo kicked off and began
the person i love was been poisoned heart to heart
I said to myself there has to be a plan
I tryed to act brave and think like man
Ee got though it and now stonger then ever
But surly she couldnt without stan

This poem is dedicated to my mum. What she has been though people can learn alot. she is my hero without a doubt


Please can you leave your commments, this is my first poem EVER!


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RevengeIsMine
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1 posted 2008-06-30 12:38 PM


I just noticed this.. I'm sorry nobody else has commented.. I know what cancer's like.. My mum's battled it several times, its clamied the life of my daughter... I understand all your pain.. Please giv your hugs to ur mum for me.. She and all the other survivers are true battlers and i wish her all the best in the future..
Falling rain
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2 posted 2008-06-30 12:53 PM


Wow you are an amazing writer and i do pray for your mom. I know many people with cancer and i know its hard.. I hope you and your mom are still hanging in there.. Great write!! =]

But of the tree of knowledge of good and evil,
thou shalt not eat of it;
for in the day that thou eatest thereof
thou shalt surely die.

Genesis

hunnie_girl
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3 posted 2008-06-30 04:05 PM


ahh what a sad poem.. i hope your mom is okay theres nothing worse than losing a loved one.. Best wishes to you and your mum.. Welcome to Passions and great 1st post.. hope to hear more from you
Krysti

CompSpud
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4 posted 2008-06-30 07:08 PM


thanks everyone! please pick things out what i need to change, i want to make this poem perfect for my mum. And thank you EVERYONE for all the replys.
Love_Skull
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5 posted 2008-07-22 01:52 AM


best of wishes to u and your mom from me! i kno how it is to fight cancer, my mom had it and we think its coming back. also alot of my family members have died from cancer.i'll pray for your mom tonight  and i hope it turns out ok. awesome poem by the way ! keep on writing!!! its going into my library.
eternally_singing
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6 posted 2008-07-22 02:10 AM


Spectacular write!! Also I know exactly what you are talking about here. My mom also had cancer but she did pull through despite all obstacles! I am always so scared it will be back. My mom is my hero too.

Great poem! (library)

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