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Teen Poetry #8

To see you cry

broken_imperfection
Junior Member

since 2008-06-27

Posts 15
WV, USA

0 posted 2008-06-28 01:26 AM

I can't stand
to know you cry..
Even worse
I hate not knowing why..

I hate to know
I can't wipe them away..
But still I stand here
sad yet another day...

I want to be able
to wipe away your tears..
I want to be able
to kiss away all your fears...

But I'm still here alone
in this place of my own..
The tears in my eyes
countless times have shown..

I don't want you to cry
I don't want you to tear...
I want you to live your life
with happiness and no fears...

Your tears kill me inside
and I can't stand this pain..
It's making me go crazy
I'm reaching insane...

"Don't hit your kids. No, seriously, they have guns now."

Ri
Member

since 2008-02-01

Posts 67
Blackburn, England

1 posted 2008-06-28 10:24 AM

I really like this, and can totally relate to this
It's really hurting me at the moment, because I see people sad and end up blaming myself for not being able to cheer them up

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-06-28 12:39 PM

I know exacally how you feel. Fantastic poem. You're a great writer.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

prettypinkrebel
Member

since 2007-11-07

Posts 104

3 posted 2008-06-28 01:37 PM

**~~thiz iz sumthin i can totally relate too! It's how I feel now about my best friend who is STATES away! THANKS great write!!~~**
Adreanna <33

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-06-28 05:02 PM

I can relate to this to. Too. You have a real gift for flow.
Exellent.

VICTORY TO THE MOLE PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

5 posted 2008-06-29 09:16 AM

i liked this alot. i think it might make my library, which i never add to. haha. anyways, i loved it, good work.

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