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broken_imperfection
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since 2008-06-27
Posts 15
WV, USA

0 posted 2008-06-27 11:49 PM



I can't put into words how I feel
can't even begin where to start
I feel so broken and abused
a lost child with a broken heart

I hate these scars of mine
the ones that adore my skin
to that or today's lone regret
of the pain I can't shield within

I hate looking at myself anymore
as I down more pills to get away
I hate the way my body looks
not eating to try and fade away

The hate within is unexplainable
as it haunts me through everyday
I'm scared to wake up tomorrow
afraid to hurt myself yet another day

I don't want to be like this anymore
I'm afraid to be myself, to live free
All I want is to get away from this hate
this hate that lies deep within me

There you have it the truth finally shows
don't expect anything else from me now
I'm sick of trying to hold on another day
I've taken all I can all my mind would allow

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
1 posted 2008-06-28 01:15 AM


I can tell already that you are a very talented writer. Keep it up and don't ever think you can't. Great poem.

           {~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

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