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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2008-06-27 11:34 AM


Okay guys.. another poem.. gee i'm on a role atm.. I guess this is about my mum.. She's being her normal self.. stuobborn n pig headed telling me what i'm doing is wrong.. anyway to my mum.. The woman that made me, broke me, and drunk me all the way under the table but the woman who i love so much that it kills to imagine life without her..

Drinking Things Over
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They say one day you lose your way
And all the dreams you had get lost
But somehow in the darkness
You learn life’s fatal cost

She’s staring at the phone
Praying that you’re all right
Why’d you have to go and leave?
It was just a stupid fight

She stands above the broken mirror
Tears rolling from her face
Mascara lines all down her cheeks
She was her own disgrace

Her clothes were tattered and torn
Her eyes were black and blue
Tonight she drank things over
Tonight she drank to you

At first it wasn’t hard it all
You’d done so much to cause her pain
But the hate just died away somehow
And she became insane

The world seemed so much darker
As she grew more alone
With tired eyes and bones slept
Still clutching the phone

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Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422
Canada
1 posted 2008-06-27 11:45 AM


This poem is awesome. It has a certain touch to it and I love it alot. Great job, keep it up! (Library)

~*Julianna*~

Six Semper Tyrannas - Thus always to tyrants...

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
2 posted 2008-06-27 05:28 PM


This is one of my favorite of yours Revenge! And that's saying somthing!

VICTORY TO THE MOLE PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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