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Broken Headlights On A Dark Road .. (Inspired by Hersey Kiss)
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Broken Headlights On A Dark Road .. (Inspired by Hersey Kiss) |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia 
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Okay guys.. not something thats ever happened to me so i can't say its heartfelt.. however i read Hersey Kisses latest piece and i felt inspired in some way to show ppl in a dark postition that there is light at the end of the tunnell.. And the ending just flowed out at the end.. so Thanks... Broken Headlights On A Dark Road __________________________________________ Broken headlights on a dark road A broken child with nowhere to go A shattered heart lies behind this door It’s time to finally end this war She’s tired and she’s crying He’s at it all again Another night of abuse And another day of it begins She’s been pushed against the wall Had her clothes ripped and torn This isn’t the life she wanted This isn’t why she was born She looks out upon the backyard All those memories are still there She was once his daughter I guess he forgot to care Her shadow dances alone As she stands to escape He may be her father Be she will not be raped She runs from her home Her hearts beating fast She’s not coming back This trip will be her last Years have come and gone And from him she hadn’t heard He never called and he never came He never said a word So as a final breathe is taken We stand to remember them all The girls who didn’t last forever The ones who broke after the fall And encrypted on a piece of paper Was a note she’d take to her grave The final plea of an elderly woman The words she’d tried her best to save Dad I’m your little girl But I can’t hide no more You have to stop with it all Because I can’t live anymore Dad it’s not your fault And those things you do regret But my promise is eternal I’ll forgive but not forget |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Wonderfuly written! Library. VICTORY TO THE MOLE PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Absolutly stunning. And the last stanza almost had me crying. I'm sure she'll love it. {~~*~~} "You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.." |
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eternally_singing Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 123PA, United States |
utterly spectacular!! great job! ~library~ |
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HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
I'm speechless this is such an amazing poem. Great job I really love it. |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Thankyou Guys... Hugs To everyone... |
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