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shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 247
inside the shadows

0 posted 2008-06-26 05:05 PM


You are my angel,
you are my dream.
You protect me from the dark
and save me from the night.
The feelings I have for you,
I cannot express in pen.
Mere sentances have not enough meaning
to say what I feel inside.
Sweetie, I love you
and I'll always be here.

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

© Copyright 2008 Tori - All Rights Reserved
lost-in-a-mind-of-dreams
Junior Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 35

1 posted 2008-06-26 05:10 PM


aww this is sweet great write!

*****dreamer*****

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
2 posted 2008-06-26 05:20 PM


Very nice dear, lovely as always.

      {~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

I am the arch angel
Member
since 2008-02-02
Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA
3 posted 2008-06-26 10:23 PM


=P wonderful!     i love you too           (she told me on msn for people who are confused) i'll always be there for you too.........your too awesome.....

love,
Keagan

keep on keeping on--Joe Dirt

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
4 posted 2008-06-27 01:29 AM


Hey Tori...

I like this poem..

Keagan tells me so much about you... I almost think that sometimes he's obsessed.. But your good for him n i know it lol..

Great work hun..
Talk soon,
Jess
xx

Earl Robertson
Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
5 posted 2008-06-27 05:45 PM


Very nice! I love it.

VICTORY TO THE MOLE PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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