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Katarina
Junior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 15
AUSTRALIA, N.S.W

0 posted 2008-06-23 07:24 AM



today was the day
when my heart was riped out
i found out you two were going out
this isnt the first time
its the second time
that youve taken my  someone i liked
and gone out
first it was jordan
now ryan
who else are you going to go out with next
eli?
the guy that i like in sweden
from the band
sk8!
lukas?!
ohh sure you dont know him
but youll find a way
youll lure him in
like what you did with the others!
he may be on the other side of the world
but you can
youll soon get to know him
and then...
well we all know what happens then...
*this may not be so good... i sometimes take my anger out in writing poetry...

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graeshine2006
Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368
The Prairie Lands, USA
1 posted 2008-06-25 04:41 AM


Smiles - keep taking that anger out in poetry!!!!  It's a much better release than some things!
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