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HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
I wrote this this morning while i anxiously waited for my dad to come home with news on my baby brother. He isn't really a baby but close to it Huge Mistake: Jake I'm so sorry That bad things happened last night I'm really sorry I wasn't there to help you fight Did you tell the doctors the truth? What did you say? Did you tell them you can't live here That you just can't stay? Did you tell the doc That you fell down the stairs? Or that dad violently threw you As you flew through the air? When I came home last night You were nowhere to be found I asked dad what happened He said you "fell and hit the ground" I asked dad If you were dead or alive he said "well come tomorrow it'll be a surprise" I wanted you to come with me But you were so peacefully sleeping To my surprise I didn't know The consequence was your beating I can't believe this really happened the one night I left you home I really knew I shouldn't have but my friends told me to come along It's all my fault I'm really sorry Jake I feel like a fool cause I made a huge mistake [This message has been edited by HersheyKiss (06-13-2008 09:31 PM).] |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Awe sweetie, it's not your fault. Don't blame yourself like that. I hope Jake's okay. Great poem like always.  {~~*~~} "You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.." |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
I'm angry. I'm usualy a peaceful person but...I dunno, your dad... I realy hope Jakes OK. Know it's not your fault but keep fighting...maybe it's time to tell the truth. I don't know. Logic is Imaginary |
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HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
I kno I really need to speak up but idk for the next couple days I'm staying with my brother in the hospital I'll see how things work out |
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yourfriendmacaroni New Member
since 2008-06-14
Posts 7United States |
Best wishes to you and your brother--I really hope all works out for the best. Be brave. Please keep us updated! |
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HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
Thanks. Well here's an update: left leg broken, major trama to his head, and broken wrist I'm not allowedd in the room the next day they say that he needs to talk to the psychatrist so he can explain what happened in his own words. I don't know cuz he doesn't wanna talk about it which I understand. I'll keep you posted. |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Whatever happenes in the end, i'm here for you. Be brave, be strong, and stay safe. {~~*~~} "You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.." |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I'm just as angry as Frank is... This is making me mad.. I know how you feel.. I have two younger brothers.. same situation... Just hold in there... Be brave.. I'm gunna pray for you and your brother even more then I usually do tonight..
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HersheyKiss Member
since 2008-06-02
Posts 137New Jersey |
thanks guys. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
yeaa hunn its eally not your fault... you couldnt have predicted it.. plus if it didnt happen that time it wood have happend another time.. I hope things go better for you and your brother. andd im always here if you need to talk. Krysti |
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