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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08
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0 posted 2008-06-10 05:32 PM


Unforgotten

Everyday I try to forget…
forget the past and now,
the future.

The past holds secrets and lies,
all of which are unforgotten,
while the truth crushes my soul.

Day by day the world passes by,
everything a blur,
while I’m thinking of nothing.

But “nothing” is a lie…
I think of everything at once,
because I still can’t forget the past.

I cry myself to sleep sometimes,
not wanting to remember…
but can’t helping it.

Now I lay here…
in my bed of tears,
officially thinking — of nothing.

~*Julianna*~

Six Semper Tyrannas - Thus always to tyrants...

© Copyright 2008 Julianna - All Rights Reserved
Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
1 posted 2008-06-10 05:42 PM


And yet doing allot of unofficial thinking to I'll bet.

Don't worry, I've been there, but I don't realy know what to say...forgetting is out of the picture, but learning to live. That's what you need.

Don't realy know what advice to give to get you on that track...but what you need is to stop wanting to torture yourself.

Thats hard but doeable. Great poem by the way.

Sanity is NOT a matter of statistics.
The earth is round, germs cause desease, and God speaks.

I am insane of course BUT STILL!!

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08
Posts 422
Canada
2 posted 2008-06-10 05:45 PM


Thanks! And I'm working on it. Really hard at that matter.

~*Julianna*~

Six Semper Tyrannas - Thus always to tyrants...

eternally_singing
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since 2007-12-18
Posts 123
PA, United States
3 posted 2008-06-10 05:55 PM


This is an amazing poem which I can relate to. I always hate how when you most want to stop thinking-- the more you do.

Anyway, AMAZING job!  = ]

Anyone odd is normal, and anyone normal is odd...


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