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0 posted 2008-06-09 04:28 PM



Here we stand together at last.
My one and truely, my love.
I know that I don't diserve you
Because your an angel from above.

You talk with your masterpiece voice
But all this is too much for me to intake.
You smile at me with gentle honesty.
How can you stand to look at me? I'm such a fake..

Swirling shades of blue,
slow dancing in your eyes.
Seeing you now..
Forces me to cry.

Memories flash back.
On how we spent our summer nights.
Sitting beneathe the stars.
Kissing under moonlight.

But here you are, dressed in white.
Curled golden hair.
Feeling so vulnerable.
Feelings so bare.

You say that you have to go.
You've been here to long.
I'll pray you'd come back one day.
Let's finish this sad love song

Night's spent alone.
Quiet in sleep.
You visit me in my dreams.
But here I'll weep.

My memories of you
haunt my mind.
Because you stole my heart.
You loving soul, so kind.

(I'm not sure if i should continue or stop writing..)



.:.:~*in loving memory of a lost love, Taylor.*~:.:.


"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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1 posted 2008-06-09 05:55 PM


This is so beautiful. I think it's fine how it is, I wouldn't change a thing.

               {~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08
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2 posted 2008-06-09 08:24 PM


Amazing. One word to describe it all. Library.

~*Julianna*~

Six Semper Tyrannas - Thus always to tyrants...

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
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3 posted 2008-06-09 08:55 PM


Library doesn't even begin to descibe it.

Sanity is NOT a matter of statistics.
The earth is round, germs cause desease, and God speaks.

I am insane of course BUT STILL!!

eternally_singing
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4 posted 2008-06-09 09:44 PM


Absolutly gorgeous! ~Library

Anyone odd is normal, and anyone normal is odd...


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