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HersheyKiss
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since 06-02-2008
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New Jersey


0 posted 06-02-2008 03:51 PM       View Profile for HersheyKiss   Email HersheyKiss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for HersheyKiss

Our Hearts Will Always Touch

When I laid there beside you,
Could you feel me there?
My arms were wrapped around you,
And I was stroking your hair.

I was talking about all the good times,
For me they were every single day.
I wanted you to feel love and comfort,
And happy in some way.

I watched your every breath,
And prayed that each one wasn't your last.
The time we got to share together,
Went by too quick...Too fast.

I wanted you to wake up,
Please Mom open your eyes.
Tell me this is a nightmare,
And not our goodbyes.

As your last breath grew closer,
We laid there peacefully together.
My heart continually breaking,
Because I wanted you forever.

Then there it was,
Your final breath of air.
I didn't want to believe it,
This is so cruel and not fair.

I held your beautiful face,
And prayed you'd breath again.
I wasn't ready for you to go,
I couldn't admit that this was the end.

But then I realized that you were now in peace,
And not suffering anymore.
You were beginning the life of an Angel,
And your body would no loner be sore.

I held you close and squeezed you tight,
And tried to say goodbye.
I've lost my Mom and my number one best friend,
All my heart could do is cry.

I slowly got up,
I wanted so much to stay.
I leaned over and gave you one more kiss,
It was so hard to walk away.

Mom you are my entire world,
And I miss you so very much.
I wish I could feel your lovable cuddle,
And your soft and gentle touch.

But for now I have to wait,
Until we meet again.
You will always be in my heart and thoughts,
My dear Mom and best friend.

Always and Forever,
Our hearts will always touch.
Always and Forever,
Your baby girl loves you so much.

RIP- Oct. 1965 - Mar. 2008
© Copyright 2008 Danielle - All Rights Reserved
Earl Robertson
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since 01-21-2008
Posts 753
BC, Canada


1 posted 06-02-2008 05:27 PM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Robertson

This is a beautiful poem. It seems (to me) to eminate peace dispite the topic.

Sorry about your mother. I know thats not enough but on the internet that's all I have.

And welcome to Pip!! May all your poems be as good as this one!

"And the sky...the sky became...PINK!!!" (Seusical the Musical)

eternally_singing
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since 12-18-2007
Posts 123
PA, United States


2 posted 06-02-2008 05:45 PM       View Profile for eternally_singing   Email eternally_singing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eternally_singing

Absolutly beautiful.

and welcome to PIP! hope to see more!

At night a candle's brighter than the sun

HersheyKiss
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since 06-02-2008
Posts 137
New Jersey


3 posted 06-02-2008 07:31 PM       View Profile for HersheyKiss   Email HersheyKiss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for HersheyKiss

Hey, thanks for your comments.
XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 01-20-2008
Posts 887
Neverland


4 posted 06-02-2008 08:50 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

This is beautiful. Such a lovely poem, and lots of emotion too. you almost had me crying. Great job, and welcome to PIP.

          {~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

Belinda
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since 01-30-2006
Posts 126
UK


5 posted 06-03-2008 08:53 AM       View Profile for Belinda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Belinda

wow,
just wow.
i'm really  sorry to hear about your mum that is awful.
great write though, you clearly idolised her.


and welcome   i look forward to reading more.

take care

Belinda~*

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

precious pearls
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since 07-24-2009
Posts 110
NJ; United States


6 posted 08-19-2009 05:05 PM       View Profile for precious pearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for precious pearls

This is sooo PRETTY ( I want to use italicizes but I can't..srry! )
You totally have a gift, just absolutely heart wrenchingly beautiful... it emanated so much hurt yet so much love... wonderful, just beyond wonderful!!!

Always,
   Kai (a.k.a. precious pearls)

 
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