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0 posted 2008-05-31 10:26 PM


Laying here in dreaded silence.
Here in this room where no light sleeps.
I'll cry with repentiveness.
Forgive me and I won't weap.

Forget my sorrows and fears.
I'll play with this knife.
While it glitters with my tears.
Sit here within my own strife.

Here the innocent lays.
Didn't mean to do a thing
But you tortured his sunny days.
How could you do something to this innocent being?

Nothing was done
To save his life.
Are you happy now that you've won?
But here he'll lay with a blood soaked knife.

Content with your plan.
You did if well.
You wretched man.
I pray that you find your way to hell.

You poor innocent thing.
No tears shead for his grave.
A song of sorrow to sing.
The melody of sweet sadness, pray his soul was save.

You pretender, you fake.
Live with your guilt.
Don't wanna here that "your sorry." Please for Christ's sake!
You broke him down never to be re-built.

But his lost soul, found his light.
So he'll live happy but you on the other hand..
Don't try to argue and fight.
His feelings for you are like sand.

(this was written about my abusive father.)  


"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

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1 posted 2008-06-01 04:17 PM


Zach, this is a sad, very emotional poem. I feel for you and hope you're okay. Very insightful, great poem, once again. God Bless! (Library)

~*Julianna*~

"When life gives you lemons...alter their DNA and make SUPER LEMONS!!!"

Earl Robertson
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2 posted 2008-06-01 09:18 PM


Zach I'm almost crying here. It takes allot to make me cry. You have my support man. If you need anything, or just want to talk email me.

This was a great expression...you've realy improved and I hope you found comfort writing this.

Give my mocking regards to your old man, he musta realy screwed up.
Frank

"And the sky...the sky became...PINK!!!" (Seusical the Musical)

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