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Teen Poetry #8

Hold On For Me

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-05-31 02:16 PM

your lost in a time
where nothing seems right,
and you dont think you cant breathe.

you've been stranded on a rope,
over an endless void.
but will you hold on for me?

your run down,
and on your last nerve.
and no one ever told you,
how much life can hurt.
but this how it is.

it doesnt make sense,
and messes with your mind.
and no matter what you do,
it gets harder in time.

believe me when i say,
this is no game.

your hearts in two pieces,
clutched in your hand.
along with the bottle,
you cant even stand...

i wish you would have
held on for me.

WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

1 posted 2008-05-31 02:18 PM

Wow. This is incredible. Another pieced of art, I love it. Excellent job.

Do the day, and let the day do you. - S. King

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2008-06-01 08:36 AM

you always do amaze me. Shock and Awe.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-06-01 11:02 AM

This just leaves me speachless and amazed. Great Job..

Hahahha I just read your copyright thing at the bottom of your poem "Simba the Great!" lmfao!!

haha Once again great work...

"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-06-01 07:00 PM

Mr Orange I've said it once and I'll say it again...You are AMAZING!

This is great stuff you're putting out.
(time to get a more sucure copy right.)lol

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

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