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Teen Poetry #8
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wolf girl
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since 2007-12-03
Posts 150
washington, US

0 posted 2008-05-30 12:36 PM


i run and hide from the feelings inside
all i want to do i die

ever since you died
all i do is hide
afraid to love
afraid to care
now its the pain i bare

i never let anyone in
scared about what they might see within
its dim

do i have a heart
am i even capable of love

i scream and run away from my own reflection

this is pathetic
and not even poetic

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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
1 posted 2008-05-30 12:48 PM


OMG.. u just made me cry.. i felt every single word.. your an amazing poet..
hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
2 posted 2008-05-30 08:10 PM


great write and again lib.

JJ

wolf girl
Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150
washington, US
3 posted 2008-06-01 10:07 PM


thank you!
wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17
Posts 224
the last place on earth
4 posted 2008-06-02 01:15 AM


i really felt this poem, i know exactly what your talking about. nice poem

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

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