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minitechie
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since 2008-05-26
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california

0 posted 2008-05-26 10:37 PM



YOUR FRIENDS MAY SAY THEY WILL NEVER TURN ON YOU, YET MORE OFTEN THAN MOST EVENTUALLY THEY DO.THAT MORE OFTEN THAN MOST HAPPENS QUITE A BIT, WHEN THAT HAPPENS YOU CAN SAY TO YOURSELF; "THEY HAVE LOST SOMETHING GOOD THEY MAY NEVER GET BACK." THAT IS WHEN YOU MOVE ON AND LET IT GO.
THAT IS WHEN YOU CAN SAY THE BLOOD OF THE BETRAYED HAS APPARENTLY BEEN PAID.

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shakalakaboomboom
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since 2008-05-19
Posts 44
V.A, U.S.A
1 posted 2008-05-27 05:27 PM


yeah that happend to me :/

reddevil013
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since 2008-04-26
Posts 12
ON, Canada
2 posted 2008-05-28 07:19 PM


I really just have to say I love that title. "Blood of the Betrayed". Its... ingenious

R.D

minitechie
Junior Member
since 2008-05-26
Posts 23
california
3 posted 2008-06-01 10:16 PM


thxx

Harlequin's Queen and Diablo's Daughter.

wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17
Posts 224
the last place on earth
4 posted 2008-06-02 01:18 AM


great poem, i think most people can relate to

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

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