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Teen Poetry #8

No second guessing

lost-in-a-mind-of-dreams
Junior Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 35

0 posted 2008-05-25 02:44 PM

Im not second guessing
myself for the things
i said to him

maybe a little
confused why you
choose to be so blind
to the anvious truth
that lies infront
of your eyes

painful as it is to see
you hurting
i dont believe what you say
so comfort is beyond me

*****dreamer*****

[This message has been edited by lost-in-a-mind-of-dreams (05-25-2008 03:29 PM).]

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-05-27 01:48 PM

Wow... i so know how you feel... Great write!!

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

2 posted 2008-05-30 08:17 PM

i also know how you feel...good job

lost-in-a-mind-of-dreams
Junior Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 35

3 posted 2008-06-02 09:26 PM

thank you both

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