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lost-in-a-mind-of-dreams Junior Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 35 |
Why cant you just be content with who you are why do you try to be me why cant you let me be you never liked him until he liked me why cant you let me have my passions why do you copy them all and try to beat me at them but when you dont you give them up and try to turn everyone against them why does everything you say have to be right or you get mad at me even though you are usually wrong why dont you see that the world is not all about YOU! i am trying to have my OWn life not one i want you to compet with why do you have to be jealous then try to do the same to me why to you bash my friends and then act like they are better than me why are you always trying to be in a competition I am sick of playing this game when you, lie, deny and all you want to do is try and hurt me i am sick of playing this game please just let it end *****dreamer***** |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Welcome to PIP Dreamer. I'm sure you'll like it here. You've written a strong poem. I liked your intensity and I am sorry about your situation.  ~Jill S. |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
welcome to pip, great first post! JJ |
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lost-in-a-mind-of-dreams Junior Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 35 |
thank you both! your comments are very much welcomed *****dreamer***** |
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