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hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-05-24 04:57 AM


I close my eyes
and spin around
i dream of a place
where no one
frowns

all i ever wanted
was for you to
come into
my heart and
sweep me off my feet
and make me believe
that there is a hope

time passes
seasons change
life goes on
but my heart
stays the same

JJ

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lost-in-a-mind-of-dreams
Junior Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 35

1 posted 2008-06-06 08:25 PM


wow i love this!
Earl Robertson
Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
2 posted 2008-06-06 09:07 PM


Absolutly brilliant! Definatly headed to my library!

Sanity is NOT a matter of statistics.
The earth is round, germs cause desease, and God speaks.

I am insane of course BUT STILL!!

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