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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 2008-05-20 05:15 PM





I felt myself dissuaded
My strings detached from his
Distanced day by day until
Nothing left as is

Once joined in head and mind and heart
But single shuns that time
The pieces from the others hearts
Will have a part of mine

And in some quiet memory
My heart remembers still
The wonders that once used to be
Were as good as those of real

So no-because my heart has
Given up this road
As it saw you first departed
You broke both heart and code

But blame is not the missing key
With master to be found
Instead, I wish unburdened heart
For myself this round

So since my heart- and quick my mind
Are all but numb to you
I think that, though confusion builds
There’s nothing I can do

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
1 posted 2008-05-20 05:25 PM


So since my heart- and quick my mind
Are all but numb to you
I think that, though confusion builds
There’s nothing I can do

I know this feeling. Exelent library write!

But compliments arn't what you need are they?
Always here
Frank

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
2 posted 2008-05-21 09:42 PM


aww frank, you are incredible. love you like the brother you are.

-Kate

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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