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Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23
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that So Cal

0 posted 2008-05-20 12:29 PM



Rock World


Welcome to Rock World,
where you're best friend is a rock.
The best thing about this world
is that your buddy doesn't talk.

He listens
when you're sad.
He's there when you're mad.
And he even sticks around when you sing.

Rocks don't move away.
They're always there to stay.

A rock is uncomfortable to lean on,
but it is a perfect foundation.

Sadly, Rock World doesn't exist.
'Cause we live in a world
where no one is missed.

© Copyright 2008 Andrew - All Rights Reserved
shakalakaboomboom
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since 2008-05-19
Posts 44
V.A, U.S.A
1 posted 2008-05-20 04:29 PM


aww i would like to have a pet rock
hell...im gonna go get on out of my backyard and make him my rock pet! ^_^

                                  ~Savana

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
2 posted 2008-05-20 05:27 PM


LOL! But this is deep isn't it?

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23
Posts 330
that So Cal
3 posted 2008-05-20 07:18 PM


Yes, it does have hidden meaning behind the silliness.

Poetry is art.

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
4 posted 2008-07-04 11:33 AM


"Sadly, Rock World doesn't exist.
'Cause we live in a world
where no one is missed."

Hey haven't been on here in a while...but i'm glad that i happened across this. What a wonderful place Rock World would be...

If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

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