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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 2008-05-19 05:57 PM



The Angel and her Guardian

Angel, dear, where are you?
You’ve gone and disappeared
Leaving me remembering
Our love to each was mirrored

I missed more than you know
Much more than words could say
And in loving me so fondly
My fears are kept at bay

In amazement and pure wonder
I sit and count my luck
At having you besides me
And getting me unstuck

Dear Guardian, forgive me
I’m back now, don’t you know
I promise I’ll not leave you
Here again, alone

I love you more, and mostly
I’ve passed all sane and more
In moments bright and happy
It’s you I now adore

I’m glad all is well with you
That I have now inspired
But now I feel its drawing closed
And I’m under in desire

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
1 posted 2008-05-20 09:44 PM


Beautiful! I think I picked up on a few things here but I'm probably completely wrong.

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
2 posted 2008-05-21 09:07 PM


what think ye thou?
Unfortunate Disaster
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since 2008-05-08
Posts 17
Australia
3 posted 2008-05-24 12:01 PM


one word.

       wow.

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