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Teen Poetry #8

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masksrlife
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since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

0 posted 2008-05-17 01:22 PM

I wrote this poem while crying and I was so upset so sorry if it doesnt make sence or is really not good at all.

I wrote the book all wrong,
I drew our perfect picture backwards
our smiles turned
our tears drawn
and your heart crushed beneith my feet.
Your hurt me to many times.
The first I blew over and ran back to you,
the second you helped to heel me and wispered
third times the charm
But turned out that your just that beast I tried to change.
I'll stand my ground tell my battle is won.
Tell I remind myself over and over again
that I dont need you here for me.
To pretend to pick me up from the ground
and hold me in your arms.
Hypnatizing me with your soft warm brown eyes.
Will guess what I got out of your deadly spell and babe
theres no chance you'll get me back into it.
I'm now free, my shakles broken from my ankles.
The chains torn from my wrists,
and now I steel my heart back. I take my dignity
my pride and leave you at the bottom of my mountain
the back of my mind were you belong and will forever stay.

*-crazycece-*

[This message has been edited by masksrlife (05-17-2008 05:44 PM).]

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

1 posted 2008-05-18 02:18 AM

it made sence to me, not sure about the flow though but nice poem

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

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