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Romantic
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since 2007-12-10
Posts 28
Lost in the eyes of the one i love

0 posted 2008-05-17 12:05 PM



I still get butterflys,
Every time I say those words.
They are something I dont say lightly,
As they are powerful things to say.
Some take them for granted,
But not me, never.
I say those words from deep within my heart,
They cant come from anywere else.
They mean so much,
Yet so few understand.
But not me.
I know what they mean,
How powerful they are,
What they can do,
And I do not use them lightly.
But I still find myself saying them,
So very often to you.
Those powerful words,
Are, "I love you"

Love... it is the best feeling in the world... but beware.. the path to happyness can hurt alot

© Copyright 2008 Mark Jochs - All Rights Reserved
hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
1 posted 2008-05-17 12:13 PM


great write, and so true many do take them for granted.(library)

JJ

Earl Robertson
Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
2 posted 2008-05-17 03:18 PM


Good write! I think I might know what you're talking about here.

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

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