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Gurl_unknown_11
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since 2008-02-10
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0 posted 2008-05-16 05:34 PM


I said goodbye again
a descision that now i regret so much
I miss your touch
and your love
but i have to go on
and pretend like i never knew you
like i never cared for you
I have to pretend like i dont love you
and it hurts so bad
because i knew what we had was true
I thought that we'd be together forever
That your love for me was stronger
than what everyone had to say
but again ive proven myself wrong
cuz wee've come to the end
a place i wish i never had to see
but its to late now
everything we've dreamed about
is now forever gone.


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1 posted 2008-05-16 05:39 PM


Hi and welcome to Pip. I see that you've posted this in open as well. Please take a moment to read the guidelines you agreed to, when joining pip. Double posting is not allowed unless you posted it in Critical analysis then into an open forum, or if the poem that you want to post is a "repost" from an archived forum. I know you are new so I'm hoping you will take the time to read the guidelines.  

SO for now, I'm going to just lock this to give you a chance to read it, then I will delete it.

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