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Mexican Cutie
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since 2008-05-14
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0 posted 2008-05-15 08:51 PM


How many times
do u want me to tell u
I'm sry
I kno i messed up

& i want to say
"I'll never do it again"
but i won't b/c I kno
I will b/c no one...
is perfect

But isn't my
my Love enough?
will u ever forgive me?
You say u love me

But then why
are u leavin me?
If u really love me
u would stay by my side

Not just Leave...
every time we fight.

Mexican~Cutie

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Mexican Cutie
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since 2008-05-14
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1 posted 2008-05-15 09:49 PM


Hey everyone i'm new to piptalk, hope u like my poem.

Mexican~Cutie

hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
2 posted 2008-05-15 10:01 PM


i like this alot great write! welcome to passions

JJ

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
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BC, Canada
3 posted 2008-05-15 10:14 PM


Welcome to PIP!!!!!

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

hunnie_girl
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4 posted 2008-05-15 10:30 PM


wow love this Andrea!!! Welcome to Passions good 1st post
Krysti

wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17
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the last place on earth
5 posted 2008-05-18 02:13 AM


great poem and welcome to pip

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

masksrlife
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since 2008-03-26
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Canada
6 posted 2008-05-18 01:43 PM


Love the poem, and welcome to pip!

*-crazycece-*

Falling rain
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7 posted 2008-05-18 03:47 PM


Hey Welcome to PIP and Great write!

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

Bahigano
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since 2008-05-13
Posts 31
Nebraska
8 posted 2008-05-20 12:00 PM


Hey girl great loved it. hope your summer is going good. well talk to you laterz.
love ya
lea

Mexican Cutie
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since 2008-05-14
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9 posted 2008-05-24 12:54 PM


thanks...i'm so glad u all like it

Mexican~Cutie

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