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Teen Poetry #8

For you

spiderilia
Junior Member

since 2008-04-24

Posts 21
Israel

0 posted 2008-05-12 08:22 AM

For you

this heart that beats inside of me
is yours,
this is a better gift that I can give
then any roze

its mine to give,
and yours to take
you want to throw away, so throw away
you want to break, so break

this heart that beats inside of me,
belong to you
thats all I have, and all that I can give
I know this is too few

you know, I am expecting nothing
in return
if you should tell me "burn in hell"
then I will go and burn

this beating heart Ill give to you
with no regret,
this is the biggest gift, the biggest love,
that you could ever get...

=P
feel free to reply...

eternally_singing
Member

since 2007-12-18

Posts 123
PA, United States

1 posted 2008-05-12 05:25 PM

very good, I liked it

At night a candle's brighter than the sun

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

2 posted 2008-05-12 07:09 PM

nice write

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