breaking up is murder love is suicide

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Teen Poetry #8

breaking up is murder love is suicide

Tripp'ncutie
Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 73
minnasota

0 posted 2008-05-10 05:00 PM

jagged edged blade
no mercy to my pain
for you are the source
i still love you

the blood drips
from open scars
you are the knife
cutting deeper
knowing too much

Sitting by the window
tears shattering the glass
causeing more wounds
more blood
knowing its better
to bleed for you
i keep loving you

the pillow
stained in red
eyes so dry
it burns
i keep crying
this will not be
the last night
i spend alone

all i've wanted
all i've needed
was someone to be there
some one to catch
the blood and tears

my parents dont know me
i am not perfect
you will see
you'll remember
how i used to be
just wait
i promise i am not ok

[This message has been edited by Tripp'ncutie (05-10-2008 11:23 PM).]

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

1 posted 2008-05-11 02:11 AM

I totally get this poem. the first stanza is my fav and i love the title.

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

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