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Unfortunate Disaster
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since 2008-05-08
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0 posted 2008-05-09 07:14 AM


(I Know this one is really lame sorry!!!!)


My eyes fill with silvery tears,
As I watch him hurt again,
I wish i could just tell him,
Let his heart begin to mend.

His girl has done a terrible thing,
And kissed another guy,
Should i be the one to tell him?
And the one to make him cry?

My friend has done the worst possible thing,
To a man that loves her so,
Should I tell her boyfriend,
That the kiss might grow?

Her boy is sensitive,
Sweet and kind,
Generous and confident,
Oh i wish that he were mine.

Is that why i can't tell him,
Of his girlfriends lie?
Or is there something more to this?
Or should i say....

                 goodbye.

(i wrote this about three months ago... since then the girl went all the way with the other guy and broke her boyfriends heart... i should have told him when i had the chance but jealousy got the better of me... if your reading this... i'm truly sorry!)

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1 posted 2008-05-11 03:05 AM


well really its not your job to have to be the messenger. and no this wasnt lame!!! I love it the flow was great!
Krysti

Unfortunate Disaster
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since 2008-05-08
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2 posted 2008-05-11 11:24 AM


i just hope he forgives me!!!!!!

pipgurl_95
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since 2008-05-11
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3 posted 2008-05-11 05:51 PM


nice poem...i really like it, i kinda went through the same situation..so i know how you feel. great poem though!

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