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Unfortunate Disaster
Junior Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 17
Australia

0 posted 2008-05-08 01:53 PM


My insides are turning,
My soul is yearning,
My heart is sturring,
Still i wait.

My hands are shaking,
My mind is mistaking,
My heart is breaking,
Still i wait.

To share his place,
To touch his face,
For his warm embrace,
I'm still waiting.

For many years,
I'll shed no tears,
Though full of fears,
I'll still be waiting.

© Copyright 2008 Kellie Knight - All Rights Reserved
Romantic
Junior Member
since 2007-12-10
Posts 28
Lost in the eyes of the one i love
1 posted 2008-05-08 02:02 PM


This is another Beautiful poem. It flows Really well and whoever this is too is a very lucky person to have someone like you.
Unfortunate Disaster
Junior Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 17
Australia
2 posted 2008-05-11 06:59 AM


Thank you. Your very kind.
pipgurl_95
New Member
since 2008-05-11
Posts 8
Michigan
3 posted 2008-05-11 02:21 PM


wow...i really like this one, its great!
Thanks for sharing!

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Tripp'ncutie
Member
since 2008-05-05
Posts 73
minnasota
4 posted 2008-05-12 08:56 AM


amazing i found it wonderfully written.
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