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clyles1
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since 2008-04-30
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0 posted 2008-04-30 11:54 PM



The light?

Wheres the light?
Where do you turn?
What do you do?
Just lost and confused.
How can you look around
and everything that means, only
seems to be crashing and burning.
Where does the pain leave and
the inner strength appear to be seen?
To me im in a tunnel with no light at the end.
Just lost and confused.

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Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
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1 posted 2008-05-01 01:50 PM


WELCOME!!!

This was a nice peice of work. I look forward to hearing more from you!

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

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since 2008-01-31
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2 posted 2008-05-01 05:29 PM


I agree with Earl. This is really good!! I liked this and as do i, i expect more poems. =]. Welcome to PIP!!

~Zach~



XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
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Neverland
3 posted 2008-05-01 05:44 PM


It's beautiful, I can feel some sort of connection through the words u used. Great job, and I hope to see more soon. Welcome to PIP.

    {~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

PAiGEY
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since 2008-05-01
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victooriaa
4 posted 2008-05-01 09:56 PM


I can totally understand your way of work.
It's beautiful.
Keep up the good work (:

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