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Teen Poetry #8

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ily06.12.07
Junior Member

since 2007-11-24

Posts 15

0 posted 2008-04-30 11:01 AM

The girl who is physically happy,
and mentally broken.

The girl who loves you,
and you love her too.

The girl who wants you to understand why she loves you,
and wants to know what makes you love her.

The girl who wishes on every star,
and whispers to herself constantly.

The girl who fights her feelings,
and attempts to be sane for you.

The girl who waits,
the girl who try's,
the girl who doesn't deserve you,
the girl who worries,
the girl who wonders.

The girl that cry's every night your not there,
and when you there slowly falls asleep in your arms.

The girl is me,
and shes slowly dying.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-04-30 06:32 PM

very interesting twist at the end. I'm a little confused, but that's just me. Great write, and sorry...i don't have any idea's for titles.

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-04-30 09:53 PM

Beautiful! i know the feeling. and for the title. how about "Only for you, my love"?

~Zach~

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