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krad008
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since 2008-02-20
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0 posted 2008-04-28 11:31 PM



I have a little time
I can take this slow
Lets make this a relationship
Lets learn about each other
Lets be happy

I found out who he is
He's a good guy
He's a good a friend
Im  happy for you two
You two deserve each other

Hey you!
Good luck tomorrow
I hope you guys win
Thanks! im pretty excited!
I hope we win to

I have a little time
I can take this slow
Lets make this a relationship
Lets learn about each other
Lets  be happy

Im having a hard time moving
Ending 4 years of hope
Knowing it ment nothing

Thanks for coming to the game
It means a lot
You never miss a game

Nope I never miss a game............


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Tripp'ncutie
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since 2008-05-05
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minnasota
1 posted 2008-05-06 07:59 PM


a little confuseing could you explain some pleezzz i would love to see or hear the story behind this poem. i can see the emotion though nice. of course all of your work i have read i see or feel the emotion so that is awsome.
krad008
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Posts 82

2 posted 2008-05-06 08:24 PM


Well you have to go back and find some of my other older poems all my poems are just a huge puzzle you have to put together. And this ones about 2 people
Tripp'ncutie
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minnasota
3 posted 2008-05-07 03:32 PM


i like puzzles they are fun, lol and this one seems to be keeping my attention.
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4 posted 2008-05-11 02:50 AM


wow great poem I loved it!!!!
Krysti

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