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Teen Poetry #8

All I've Ever Wanted

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

0 posted 2008-04-28 05:04 PM

All I want, all I’ve ever wanted
Is to be free
To feel your arms around me
Without any pain or regret
To run in the wind
Without thinking about these chains
All I want, all I’ve ever wanted
Is to fly above the clouds
Forgetting everything and anything,
That has ever hurt me
All I want, all I’ve ever wanted
Is for someone to help me
Help me carry this pain I’ve been dealing with
I can’t do it alone
There’s just one problem...
It’s too much to ask

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-04-28 05:08 PM

Wow Tori!! When i was reading this it reminded me of you and your bf. Like you were talking to him useing these words. Great work!!

~Zach~

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-04-28 08:59 PM

Beautiful, wonderful and it got me thinking to!

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

PAiGEY
Junior Member

since 2008-05-01

Posts 13
victooriaa

3 posted 2008-05-01 10:38 PM

you really got me thinking, so thankyou.

i can tell your a talented writer.

keep it up!!

x.paaige.x

BrettK
New Member

since 2008-04-19

Posts 3

4 posted 2008-05-01 10:48 PM

Hey thats really amazing your so talented

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

5 posted 2008-05-07 08:00 PM

Thanx for the comments everyone.

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

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