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Teen Poetry #8

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XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-04-27 10:48 PM

~ this is a pretty bad poem, I really only wrote it out of boredom...

Cold and frozen in regret.
Sitting by myself,
and trying to forget.
Where warm tears fall,
there's a hand in
mine; an imaginary
friend who has always
been kind. With wings
of a marnoch and teeth
like a shark, my only
comfort sits with me
and my falling tears.
Bark covered arms and eye's
of only white, she's put
me under her spell of
truth and tricks me in
delight.

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-04-28 08:14 AM

Nice this is pretty creative write and it did somewhat ryhmed. but i think there was like one part that didn't though. And you never know some words that come out of boredum might be pretty good.

Great write!!

~Zach~

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-04-28 07:29 PM

LOL great poem!

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

3 posted 2008-04-28 10:25 PM

LOVED IT! it was very creative and I just tottaly understood it. ENJOYED!

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