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Teen Poetry #8

Crimson Tears of Remorse

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-04-26 07:33 PM

Silence, shattered by your
thoughts. No more tears will
fall in the light of today.
Hidden by the fake bliss of
who is caring enough to leave,
leave us all behind
to live with ourselfs in our remorse.

Thank no one for leaving you
here. This is your doing, you
left yourself in the silence
for too long. It now sits
biside you again, tempting you
away. Comforting you in the
darkness of our crimson forest,
captivating your view of what
lurks infront of you.

Hate me for loving you, for
trying to protect you. But do
not dare turn from the one who
will destoy you. No, that would
be true sanity.

It leads you from my pleaing sobs,
brings you where you can see.
Tells you lies of what I've done,
greats you as the special one.

Under the stars you lay in it's
field, the swaing grass sings you
to sleep. And in your dreams you
see me screaming, telling you of
what you have now become. You
awaken under water, drowning in
my tears. Under the crimson tears
of remorse and insanity, in
this forest of hidden pain, you
finally realise that I am in the
silence. I am the one, letting you
go.

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

1 posted 2008-04-28 01:08 AM

wow this sounds so much like someone i used to know. great poem going in the lib

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-04-29 09:28 PM

Thanks for reading and im glad u enjoyed it.

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

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