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shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 247
inside the shadows

0 posted 2008-04-26 02:59 PM


His gaze lingering above her,
looking at her lovingly.  
His full lips meet her own
as they move together sensually.  
The raindrops falling around them
and the fire crackling by their side.  
Oblivious to anything around them,
they entwined in a beautiful duet;
electricity flowing as the seconds passed by,
each moment slower than the one before.  
Breathless and passionate,
their kiss breaks off
as they gaze into each others eyes,
his breath whispering soft comfort into her ear.
Her head once again,
finds its way towards the top of his chest,
feeling the throbbing motion of his heart.  
Her hands once again, entwined with his own
as he softly caresses her skin.  
Eyes closed, hearts open,
they find the core of blissful seduction
once again.

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

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masksrlife
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since 2008-03-26
Posts 109
Canada
1 posted 2008-04-27 03:40 PM


Hey TJ i love this poem as i have said before. Its so beutiful! loved it

*-crazycece-*

Ri
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since 2008-02-01
Posts 67
Blackburn, England
2 posted 2008-04-27 03:54 PM


This is a great poem, it is so sensual
I particularly like the line
"Eyes closed, hearts open"
So simple, yet so true.

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