The U Turn Of Friendship ( So I Guess This Is Goodbye)

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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

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Australia

0 posted 2008-04-26 05:52 AM

I guess i never dodged the bullet, the one you sent for me
You engraved my name on the side, pulled the trigger set it free
How did we get lost, in this life so full of hate
All the times i ran to you, all the times i thought you were my mate

I still don’t know how to say it; don’t know exactly how to feel
I guess breathing is just the start, but there won’t be an appeal
I’m done believing in who i am, done with all this pain
Its time for me to walk away, because if I stay here i’ll go insane

I trusted you so much, but you just threw it all away
I was just another person you could forget about the next day
Friendship isn’t supposed to be easy, but you’re meant stay and fight
You not supposed to give up, you’re supposed to do what’s right

So maybe things have changed, but when I cried you weren’t there
When i fell down you didn’t stop to look, cause you never really cared.

So now I’m sitting here, crying under this full moon
You’re really back again, but I guess you’ll be going soon
You say you wanna talk, but you don’t really care
It’s okay to walk away now, cause life was never made to be fair

I can’t let you in, because I know you won’t stay long
And everyday i’ll keep asking myself, where the hell we went wrong
But for now this is it, no more tears will I cry
After all that we’ve been through, I’m sorry but goodbye

wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

1 posted 2008-04-26 10:24 AM

I guess i never dodged the bullet, the one you sent for me
You engraved my name on the side, pulled the trigger set it free
How did we get lost, in this life so full of hate
All the times i ran to you, all the times i thought you were my mate

I love this

Awesome pome

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-04-26 01:27 PM

wow. It sounds kinda like what happened with me and who I thought was my best friend. This is going in my library, amazingly writen.

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

3 posted 2008-04-26 02:26 PM

Em: what?!

TJ

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

4 posted 2008-04-26 02:27 PM

Really good poem though Jess.

TJ

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2008-04-26 02:54 PM

wow Jess hunn, I love this!!!1 its so beautifully written

Krysti

XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland

6 posted 2008-04-26 04:26 PM

Not YOU Tori! Katie!

again jess, great poem.

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

The Shadow in Blue
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since 2006-05-18

Posts 493
EL, Michigan

7 posted 2008-04-26 09:39 PM

Quite poignant RevengeIsMine...somber yet beautiful. I liked it. I can relate to it...

~Jill

spiderilia
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since 2008-04-24

Posts 21
Israel

8 posted 2008-04-27 01:58 PM

well what can i say? just beautifull...but sad... totally relate to it!

I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02

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nowhere,illinois,USA

9 posted 2008-04-27 11:38 PM

jess....deeply written... filled with emotion that makes it beautiful.... just know that if you need to talk to somebody about a problem...i will listen i promise sometimes just talking about it can help you solve it
again beautifly written! --keagan

earn your freedom of the charge of sacrificing your life for others

rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28

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usa

10 posted 2008-04-28 12:48 PM

omg u liked spelled out my life rigt there. this was awsome.

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

11 posted 2008-04-28 08:36 AM

Thanks Guys.. This was really hard to write.. i guess its done now and our friendship is well gone so its done i think writing this piece helped me realize it was time for me to be the bigger person and say goodbye because its all just too much harder to stay and know your hiding so much from your best mate.. Thanks again guys.

masksrlife
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since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

12 posted 2008-04-28 10:39 PM

I really really loved this poem. It blew my mind at how will it was written enjoyed!

*-crazycece-*

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

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Small town, Illinois

13 posted 2008-04-29 08:07 AM

Awe this made me cry *snifles* Great write! i hope things go well. =]

~Zach~

Britt_Brat
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since 2008-03-05

Posts 37
Knoxville, TN

14 posted 2008-04-29 03:26 PM

sorry this is happening to you. I know how you feel though you stole the words right out my mouth this is how one of my friend makes me feel

Is it to be true that you would hurt me

hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07

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at the beach... i wish

15 posted 2008-04-29 07:28 PM

i am really sorry too, but great write!

JJ

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