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XxForever.BrokenxX
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0 posted 2008-04-25 11:37 PM



I used to be able to laugh.
I used to be able to cry.
Why is it that now,
I just sit here and
watch life pass by?
I didn't do anything
right, I can't find
something I did wrong.
Why has my life turned
on me? Why am I
singing this sad song?

With so many questions,
to much confusion, I
don't try to think and
I don't try to hide.
I'll sit behind my glass
wall, I wont attempt to
leave your side. I will
protect you in our world
of loneliness. I wont
let you fall into the
arms of the real world,
The arms of the ones who
led us to the center of
destruction.

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

© Copyright 2008 Emmalee Yuri - All Rights Reserved
Falling rain
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1 posted 2008-04-26 12:56 PM


Wow sounds like my life story, Great work!

~Zach~



RevengeIsMine
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2 posted 2008-04-26 06:52 AM


Agree with Zach this poem is like tottally awesome..  and it reminds me so much of my own life.
wisdomofthesword
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3 posted 2008-04-26 10:25 AM


great poem

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

shattered-smiles
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4 posted 2008-04-26 02:30 PM


Great poem.

TJ

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

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5 posted 2008-04-26 02:56 PM


WOW. amazen poem Em.
Krysti

Earl Robertson
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6 posted 2008-04-26 03:04 PM


Amazing! I know exactly what you're talking about, as does everyone else apparently.

Horrible isn't it that all of us are there (or have been there) but none of us open up enough to have or be given a measure of empathy. Not one of us.

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

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7 posted 2008-04-27 11:17 AM


I fully agree with you Earl. Its pretty sad isn't it?

~Zach~



XxForever.BrokenxX
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8 posted 2008-04-27 04:30 PM


Yes it is sad. But maybe we're all just to scared to take a chance at trusting some one. But thanks for reading.

       {~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

Earl Robertson
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9 posted 2008-05-02 07:14 PM


I ask again Why?

"We all lead such elaborate lives, We don't know who's words are true." Aida

XxForever.BrokenxX
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10 posted 2008-05-02 08:58 PM


Well to answer ur question Earl, it could be from past childhood experiences. Some are just to scared to open up becuse they don't think that someone will believe them, or that they'll take a different side. And some people just don't like the jugement that they get from others. Its just a way that people react I guess. I hope that answers everyone's questions, probably not but hey..I try. lol

   {~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

BookOfMoon
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11 posted 2008-05-05 12:04 PM


keeping one you love safe within your arms,

we should all try to do that more often

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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12 posted 2008-05-10 02:04 PM


I think it says alot. Many perople read between the lines to find the truer meaning, I really like it. Great job once again!
hiddensmiles
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13 posted 2008-05-10 03:09 PM


great poem

JJ

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