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Once apon a time....

She locked in her tower
Away from it all
Left to do the dirty work
Washing windows in the grand hall

Her dad is dead
Step mother took his place
Step daughters moved in
Both with an evil grin on their face

One night a year The Ball is held
The prince is there
Waiting in haste
For she needs to be the fair

The sun has set
Alone in her room
Tears stream down her face
All of a sudden a little light bloom

With a "Boom!" and "Clash!"
A figure stands in the smoke
"Here i am!"
There she stood drenched and soaked

"Who are you?"
Poor Cindy cried
"Why i am the one who gives you a wish"
She said and sighed.

"So what will it be my dear?"
She said while ringing out her dress.
"I want to go to the ball"
"I should of know you'd want that more than less"

With a wave of her wand
A dress appeared.
White as snow.
She stood there in shock, slightly in fear.

"Will that be all my dear?"
She said with haste.
"No Mam' I have no ride to go"
"Well." She said. "We have no time to waste!"

Another flick of her wand
the pumpkin grew.
Mice changed into horses
The carage was drewn.
The Prince greeting guest
Ladies most of them all
"Where is she?" He thought.
"The invitations were sent out for the ball"

The wind was wirling.
Cindy was on her way
She had to kiss the prince
Before the light of day.
There at the Ball
The ochestra played
The Prince in his throne. "Will she come?"
He wondered that all day.

His princess had came.
She lit the room.
As soon as she was noticed.
The ladies loomed

The dance has begun
He stepped forword
Dainty she be.
No spoken words

They danced the night away.
Intill sun rise came
She look towards the horizen
She ran from the Ball , all the same

The magic worn off
The deed was done
All because the sun had to rise
Cindy was done with her fun.
Weeks passed
No messege sent
Cindy's heart was slowly to break
But it didn't, its only bent

A knock at the door
Step sisters flew
For they all knew...
But what was the prince doing here with only a glass shoe?

He asked them to try on the shoe
All of them fail
But little did he know there was someone else there.
Cindy be the one who did prevail.

They were to be wedd
For though her heart was slowly to bend.
From the days not spoken
Slowly she knew it was to mend

Off into the sunset.
Her heart a mend
Finish this story
So they lived a happily ever after end

The End...
Yeah i know the typical Fairytale. lol Also i think this is the longest poem i ever wrote *Phew!* And man am i tired! lol


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1 posted 04-15-2008 07:54 PM       View Profile for XxForever.BrokenxX   Email XxForever.BrokenxX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for XxForever.BrokenxX

awe, the whole time i was reading it I kept on picturing scences from Cinderella. I love the little mice, there so cute! anyway. great poem.


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2 posted 04-15-2008 08:08 PM       View Profile for masksrlife   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for masksrlife

This was very good! Awesome write. And even if it was just the typical fairy tale, I still loved it and tottaly can relate!


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3 posted 04-17-2008 09:02 AM       View Profile for surf_painter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for surf_painter

I liked the poem for the most part, there were a few little areas that seemed a bit bumpy when reading but overall it was good and I always enjoy a good fairytale
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4 posted 11-11-2008 06:02 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

oppssyyy! I am so sorry to just stumble upon this poem that you did for my challenge!
~Good thing I was looking at the poetry Challenge forum!

Great write

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